کلاس UA6 – جلسه 13 – Part A

In the comment box, rewrite the passage, and improve the style. You should do the followings:

• Paraphrase, using more interesting vocabulary
• Reorder the information so your text can have a better flow
• Avoid repetition
• Join the sentences (use conjunctions of times, contrasts, and purposes, and use participle clauses) (see ex. 4, page 142)

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